Domestic bliss

frontwheelneil · « **on:** May 14, 2007, 08:07:15 PM »

Although I enjoy making everyone smile,
this poetry game's gotta stop for a while.
The trouble you see is the missus is mad,
'cos I sit around with a pen and a pad.
She says I'm neglecting her and the kids,
now I've started to write poems for my fellow yids.
I look out of the window ,scratching my head,
thinking about my next humourous thread.
I stare at the paper 'til everything blurs,
then jump out of my seat screaming COME ON YOU SPURS.
I type it all out and then give it to you,
but I've got a wife(gotta give her one too!)
I need to get my priorities right,
or else I'll end up in the dog house tonight.
So you won't be hearing so often from me,
You'll have to make up your own poetry.
This isn't goodbye,it's only a rest,
and then I'll get more of these rhymes off my chest.
I hope that everyone here understands,
PS,if you love Berbatov please clap your hands.
:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

Storts · « **Reply #1 on:** May 14, 2007, 08:20:52 PM »

Quality mate

Return soon

Dj Frisky · « **Reply #2 on:** May 14, 2007, 08:54:42 PM »

Another great poem mate it's a shame you have to go.

THWH90 · « **Reply #3 on:** May 14, 2007, 09:00:38 PM »

Gr8 poem, a shame you have 2 go

Do you write poems as a professions mate?

Also, I like the: rhyming couplets,caesuras,alliteration,personal pronouns... This is turning into my English GCSE lesson!

Jude106 · « **Reply #4 on:** May 14, 2007, 09:37:30 PM »

Mate, your poetry rocks! Gonna miss it for a while

Berba's girl · « **Reply #5 on:** May 14, 2007, 09:58:56 PM »

Love it! Every now & then I get the urge to write a poem - it's always humourous though, can't write anything serious.

frontwheelneil · « **Reply #6 on:** May 14, 2007, 10:11:34 PM »

No,it's just something I've started to do.Good for a laugh,but a bit addictive!
Nobodys clapping their hands,so don't you like Berbs?

dazzaTh · « **Reply #7 on:** May 14, 2007, 11:01:44 PM »

:clap::clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

Loving the poetry mate.

ShelfsideSpur · « **Reply #8 on:** May 15, 2007, 06:35:54 AM »

:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

Great stuff, enjoy the break

COYS :Ireland:

Berba's girl · « **Reply #9 on:** May 15, 2007, 05:06:58 PM »

As if you have to ask! Isn't my username, avatar & sig pic enough of a clue?!!

:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

I worship the ground Berby walks on!

Domestic bliss

Berba's girl

Berba's girl